Wu Huizhen, Zhu Huimin, Yang Xiaohu
School of Foreign Languages, Tongji University, Shanghai, China.
Faculty of Foreign Languages, Shanghai Business School, Shanghai, China.
Front Psychol. 2022 Dec 1;13:1059555. doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2022.1059555. eCollection 2022.
Despite the important role of the genre awareness in facilitating the effective communication in the global business context and the need to teach and practice writing for various social purposes, there was scant classroom-based research on effects of providing peer feedback on EFL learners' genre awareness in business writing for fulfilling the particular communicative purpose. This study examined whether student reviewers could improve their genre awareness in business letter writing by providing peer feedback to other students' writings at varying levels. Sixty business English majors, taking the business writing course for 1 year under the tutelage of the same instructor, participated in the current study. They were randomly assigned to the experimental group who reviewed the students' drafts at different levels (high, medium and low) and gave written comments and the control group who received no treatment but did self-revision. Both groups followed the genre-specific evaluation criteria during peer feedback and self-revision. Repeated-measures ANOVA on the two groups' writing performances at different timepoints (pretest, immediate posttest, transfer posttest and delayed transfer posttest) demonstrated that the participants in the experimental group had better performance than those in the control group at the transfer posttest as well as the delayed transfer posttest. Moreover, providing weakness comments on both the low-quality and the medium-quality drafts had significant effects on their own writing quality at the subsequent tests, whereas providing strength feedback on the high-quality drafts had statistically significant impacts on their own writing quality at the immediate posttest and the delayed transfer posttest. However, multiple linear regression analyses demonstrated that only offering weakness comments to the medium-quality drafts could effectively predict the reviewers' overall writing quality in the immediate posttest, the transfer posttest, and the delayed transfer posttest. Tentative research and pedagogical implications of the findings were discussed.
尽管体裁意识在促进全球商业环境中的有效沟通方面发挥着重要作用,且有必要针对各种社会目的进行写作教学与实践,但针对为实现特定交际目的而在商务写作中为英语学习者提供同伴反馈对其体裁意识的影响,基于课堂的研究却很少。本研究探讨了学生审稿人是否能够通过为不同水平的其他学生的写作提供同伴反馈来提高他们在商务信函写作中的体裁意识。60名商务英语专业学生参与了本研究,他们在同一位教师的指导下学习商务写作课程1年。他们被随机分配到实验组,该组对不同水平(高、中、低)的学生草稿进行审阅并给出书面评论,以及对照组,该组未接受任何处理,只是进行自我修改。两组在同伴反馈和自我修改过程中都遵循特定体裁的评估标准。对两组在不同时间点(前测、即时后测、迁移后测和延迟迁移后测)的写作表现进行重复测量方差分析表明,实验组的参与者在迁移后测以及延迟迁移后测中的表现优于对照组。此外,对低质量和中等质量的草稿给出弱点评论对他们在后续测试中的自身写作质量有显著影响,而对高质量草稿给出优点反馈在即时后测和延迟迁移后测中对他们的自身写作质量有统计学上的显著影响。然而,多元线性回归分析表明,只有对中等质量的草稿给出弱点评论才能有效预测审稿人在即时后测、迁移后测和延迟迁移后测中的整体写作质量。文中讨论了这些研究结果的初步研究和教学意义。