O'Malley Mary-Pat, Armstrong Elizabeth, Lyons Rena, Müller Nicole
Discipline of Speech & Language Therapy, School of Health Sciences, University of Galway, Galway, Republic of Ireland.
Communication, Brain and Culture Research Centre, School of Medical and Health Sciences, Edith Cowan University, Perth, Australia.
Int J Lang Commun Disord. 2025 Sep-Oct;60(5):e70113. doi: 10.1111/1460-6984.70113.
This paper examines assessment report-writing from a critical perspective, a relatively unexplored aspect of speech and language therapy (SLT) clinical practice. To date, there has been little discussion of the relationship between discourse formats, objectives of assessment reports, and the effects of these objectives on how clients and speech and language therapists (SLTs) are portrayed. Furthermore, there has been little exploration of the concepts of objectivity and scientific writing in relation to report-writing in SLT. An emphasis on a scientific, objectifying system has long been in operation in the profession: the establishment of diagnostic categories and the relegation of the personal, subjective experiences of client and SLT to secondary, non-scientific status. However, person-centred care (PCC) is now a focus in SLT in an attempt to rehumanise care by considering clients as unique individuals with important knowledge to contribute.
To examine representations of clients and SLTs in assessment report-writing drawing on systemic functional linguistics (SFL) and critical discourse analysis.
A total of 28 assessment reports were collected: 18 assessment report-writing exemplars from published texts aimed at modelling professional report-writing and 10 assessment reports from clinical practice. The global structure of the reports was identified, and the reports were also analysed using transitivity analysis as defined in SFL. Doing, saying, sensing, and being processes, and passives were identified.
Without exception, all reports followed a similar global structure for organising the content, with an overall focus on presenting the speech, language, communication, and swallowing/feeding impairments under consideration while omitting the perspectives of the clients and families. The global structure was characterised by a problem focus. The use of passive verbs masked the SLT as an agent of clinical actions and positioned the clients as recipients of the actions of unidentified professionals while also under-emphasising their individual perspectives, experiences, and goals. SLTs used categorical assertions (i.e., declarative statements with no modality) to make claims appear scientific, while the relatively less-frequent contributions of clients and family members were introduced using saying processes, highlighting their subjectivity. In the paediatric reports, no child's perspective was included.
Findings reveal an almost exclusive focus on impairment combined with an absence of the client's perspectives, experiences, and goals. Consistent patterns were identified across the data sets. First, verb choices position clients as passive recipients of the actions of the SLT rather than agents in their own right. Second, markers of scientific discourse such as agentless passives remove both the SLT and the client as agents/actors in the SLT assessment process. The findings require us to consider the implications of perpetuating the status quo of report-writing featuring mainly deficit discourse and how we may incorporate PCC in SLT report-writing.
What is already known on this subject A focus on the person in SLT has long been advocated in the literature. The medical model has long been critiqued, and a biopsychosocial model has been promoted. Person-centred care is being implemented in a range of settings globally. Report-writing practices in SLT have not been explored in relation to representations of clients and SLTs at a micro-level. What this study adds to existing knowledge This study provides an account of assessment report-writing practices in speech and language therapy (SLT). It highlights the discourses of deficit that permeate the reports through a predominance of patterns which obscure the SLT as an agent of clinical actions, position the client as a recipient of those actions, and omit the personal perspectives of clients and their families. The 'objective' is privileged over the subjective, the legal and systemic constraints of the report-writing contexts notwithstanding. What are the potential or actual clinical implications of this work? It can be claimed that in order to successfully argue for services, assessment reports must make a case for client incompetence. This study challenges this claim and provides clinicians with a critical perspective on assessment report-writing practices in SLT. The study also encourages SLTs to consider ways in which report writing may be made more person- and strengths-focused while simultaneously conforming with/to legal and professional requirements.
本文从批判性视角审视评估报告的撰写,这是言语和语言治疗(SLT)临床实践中一个相对未被探索的方面。迄今为止,关于话语格式、评估报告目标以及这些目标对客户和言语及语言治疗师(SLT)呈现方式的影响,几乎没有相关讨论。此外,对于SLT报告撰写中客观性和科学写作的概念,也鲜有探索。长期以来,该专业一直强调科学的、客观化的体系:建立诊断类别,并将客户和SLT的个人主观体验置于次要的、非科学的地位。然而,以患者为中心的护理(PCC)现在是SLT的一个重点,试图通过将客户视为具有重要知识可贡献的独特个体来使护理更加人性化。
运用系统功能语言学(SFL)和批判性话语分析,研究评估报告撰写中客户和SLT的呈现方式。
共收集了28份评估报告:18份来自已发表文本的评估报告撰写范例,旨在为专业报告撰写提供范例,以及10份来自临床实践的评估报告。确定了报告的整体结构,并使用SFL中定义的及物性分析对报告进行了分析。识别了做、说、感知和存在过程以及被动语态。
无一例外,所有报告都遵循类似的整体结构来组织内容,总体上侧重于呈现所考虑的言语、语言、沟通和吞咽/喂养障碍,而忽略了客户和家庭的观点。整体结构以问题为重点。被动动词的使用掩盖了SLT作为临床行动的执行者,将客户定位为未指明专业人员行动的接受者,同时也淡化了他们的个人观点、经历和目标。SLT使用分类断言(即没有情态的陈述性语句)使主张显得科学,而客户和家庭成员相对较少的贡献则通过说的过程引入,突出了他们的主观性。在儿科报告中,没有纳入任何儿童的观点。
研究结果显示几乎完全专注于障碍,同时缺乏客户的观点、经历和目标。在各数据集中发现了一致的模式。首先,动词选择将客户定位为SLT行动的被动接受者,而不是自身行动的执行者。其次,诸如无施事被动语态等科学话语标记在SLT评估过程中消除了SLT和客户作为施事/参与者的身份。这些发现要求我们考虑维持以主要缺陷话语为特征的报告撰写现状的影响,以及我们如何在SLT报告撰写中纳入PCC。
关于该主题已知的内容 长期以来,文献中一直提倡在SLT中关注患者。医学模式长期以来受到批评,生物心理社会模式得到推广。以患者为中心的护理正在全球范围内的一系列环境中实施。SLT中的报告撰写实践在微观层面上与客户和SLT的呈现方式尚未得到探索。本研究对现有知识的补充 本研究描述了言语和语言治疗(SLT)中的评估报告撰写实践。它强调了缺陷话语如何通过占主导地位的模式渗透到报告中,这些模式掩盖了SLT作为临床行动执行者的身份,将客户定位为这些行动的接受者,并省略了客户及其家庭的个人观点。尽管存在报告撰写背景的法律和系统限制,但“客观”优先于“主观”。这项工作的潜在或实际临床意义是什么?可以说,为了成功争取服务,评估报告必须证明客户无能力。本研究对这一说法提出了质疑,并为临床医生提供了对SLT评估报告撰写实践的批判性视角。该研究还鼓励SLT考虑如何在符合法律和专业要求的同时,使报告撰写更以患者和优势为重点。