DeBakey L, DeBakey S
Int J Cardiol. 1984 Aug;6(2):247-54. doi: 10.1016/0167-5273(84)90362-0.
When you have completed the first draft of your manuscript, put it aside for a couple of weeks before you begin your critical review and revision, so that you will examine it with a fresh eye and renewed interest. Read your composition several times, concentrating on a specific criterion each time. Begin with the general principles of originality and validity; next move to structure and organization, then to grammatical propriety and usage, and finally to readability. Sensitize yourself to the recurrent maladies in medical writing--the verbosity, jargon, imprecision, barbarisms, stereotypy, illogical locutions, improper sequence of tenses, and generally unappealing style. Remember, you are writing to convey an important message, so make sure your style and form illumine rather than eclipse or becloud that message.
完成手稿初稿后,在开始批判性审阅和修改之前,先将其搁置几周,这样你就能以全新的视角和更浓厚的兴趣来审视它。多次阅读你的文章,每次专注于一个特定标准。首先从原创性和有效性的一般原则入手;接着关注结构和组织,然后是语法正确性和用法,最后是可读性。让自己对医学写作中反复出现的弊病保持敏感——冗长、行话、不精确、野蛮用语、陈词滥调、不合逻辑的措辞、时态顺序不当以及总体上缺乏吸引力的风格。记住,你写作是为了传达一个重要信息,所以要确保你的风格和形式能够阐明而不是掩盖或模糊这个信息。